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Sets of Three

Chapter 2 of 8

Hierarchy

The food appears in the center.

David wakes first and sees it. Three protein bars. Three bottles of water. Same as last time. He doesn’t remember falling asleep - none of them do, that’s the thing that bothers him most. One moment they’re awake, talking or sitting in silence, and then they’re all unconscious. Like something in the air knocked them out simultaneously.

The old wrappers are gone. That bothers him too. He wanted to stack them against the wall in his section, counting them like tally marks. But whenever the new food appears, the old trash vanishes. No explanation. No logic. Just another rule of this place he can’t control.

He moves to the food quickly, before the others wake. Not to take more than his share. Just to be the one who divides it.

Jamie’s eyes open. She watches him from across the pit, saying nothing.

“Same as always,” David says, placing one bar and one bottle in front of her position, then one set near Chen, then taking his own. “Make it last.”

Jamie tears into the bar immediately. She’s maybe twenty-five, rail thin, with a nervous energy that hasn’t dimmed in however long they’ve been here. She eats standing up, pacing, never sitting still.

Chen unwraps his bar slowly, methodically. He’s older, maybe sixty, with the kind of weathered face that suggests he’s seen worse than a concrete pit. Or maybe he’s just good at pretending he has.

“You should ration that,” David tells Jamie. “We don’t know when—”

“We know exactly when,” Jamie interrupts, mouth full. “However many days or hours or minutes. However the hell long it is. It’s always the same. You literally just divided it like you always do.”

“Still. Better to be careful.”

“Why? What’s the point of saving it? So I can die of boredom instead of starvation?”

Chen takes a small sip of water. “She has a point.”

David’s jaw tightens. “We need discipline. That’s what keeps us human down here.”

“Pretty sure being human is what got us in this mess,” Jamie says.

The pit is twenty feet across. Forty feet deep. Smooth concrete walls. Gray circle of sky that never changes. David’s claimed the north section as his. Not explicitly, not in so many words, but he stays there, keeps his water bottle there, and gets annoyed when anyone else lingers too long in that quadrant. Jamie bounces between east and west, never settling. Chen has the south wall and doesn’t move from it unless necessary.

“We should exercise,” David announces. He’s always announcing things. “Keep our bodies strong.”

“For what?” Jamie asks.

“For when we get out.”

“You still think we’re getting out?”

“I know we are.”

Chen takes another careful sip. “How?”

“Because someone put us here. Which means someone can take us out. We just need to be ready when that happens.”

“Ready for what?” Jamie’s voice edges toward mockery. “You gonna fight our way out of a forty-foot pit? Climb those smooth walls with your exceptional muscle tone?”

“Better than giving up.”

“I’m not giving up. I’m being realistic.”

“Realism is just giving up with better vocabulary.”

Chen makes a sound that might be a laugh. David glares at him. Something’s been shifting lately. David’s losing ground and he knows it. All his structure, his rules, his insistence on maintaining civilization—it’s starting to look like the tantrum of a man who can’t accept he’s not in control.

“Let’s do inventory,” David says, changing tactics. “What do we have? Chen, you still have those shoelaces?”

“Yes.”

“Jamie, your hair tie?”

“Obviously.” She pulls it out, snaps it, puts it back in. “Want to make a rope? We’ve been through this. We don’t have enough material to make anything useful.”

“We might think of something we haven’t tried.”

“We’ve tried everything. Multiple times. With extensive discussion afterward. I could write a fucking thesis on failed escape attempts from smooth-walled concrete pits.”

David’s hands clench. “You don’t have to be such a—”

“Such a what?”

The silence stretches. Chen watches them both with the patience of someone who’s seen this play out before. This exact fight, this exact dynamic, just with different words.

“We need to work together,” David finally says. His voice has that forced calm that’s worse than yelling. “Fighting doesn’t help anyone.”

“Neither does pretending you’re our leader.”

“I never said I was—”

“You don’t have to say it. You do it. Dividing the food. Making schedules. Telling us what to do. Like you’re running a fucking team meeting.”

“Someone has to organize things.”

“Why?”

David stares at her like she’s asked why water is wet. “Because that’s how society functions. Structure. Rules. Organization.”

“This isn’t society. It’s three people in a pit.”

“Exactly. Which means we need structure even more. Without it, we’re just animals.”

Chen speaks up quietly. “Maybe that’s not so bad.”

They both turn to look at him. He’s still sitting against his wall, still holding his protein bar, still radiating that unnerving calm.

“What do you mean?” David asks.

“Animals don’t need calendars. Don’t need leaders. They just exist.”

“That’s giving up.”

“Is it? Or is it accepting?”

“There’s no difference.”

“I think there is.”

The conversation dies. Jamie finishes her protein bar and crumples the wrapper, tossing it toward the center of the pit where it’ll disappear next time. David carefully folds his wrapper into a small square and places it at the base of the wall in his section, even though he knows it won’t be there later. Chen sets his bar down, only half-eaten, covering it with the wrapper to save for later.

Three different survival strategies. Three different approaches to the same unbearable situation.

Hours pass. Or minutes. Or days. Time’s an agreement they maintain out of habit, not reality.

David’s doing push-ups in his section. Jamie’s pacing, always pacing. Chen hasn’t moved in what might be two hours.

“I think we should vote,” Jamie says suddenly.

David pauses mid-push-up. “Vote on what?”

“On who divides the food.”

“Why?”

“Because you just declared yourself food distributor without asking anyone.”

“Someone had to do it.”

“So let’s vote. Make it official. Democratic.”

David straightens up, breathing hard. “Fine. All in favor of me continuing to divide the food?”

He raises his hand. Chen doesn’t move. Jamie smirks.

“All in favor of rotating the responsibility?” Jamie raises her hand. Chen slowly raises his.

“Majority rules,” Jamie says. “Welcome to democracy.”

David’s face goes through several expressions before settling on forced neutrality. “Fine. Who’s first?”

“Chen. Since he voted but didn’t advocate either way.”

Chen looks surprised. “I don’t want to—”

“Too late. You’re up next time. Or whatever the hell we’re calling it.”

The shift is subtle but seismic. David retreats to his section, jaw tight. Jamie looks satisfied for the first time in forever. Chen looks uncomfortable, like he’s been handed a responsibility he never asked for.

This is how it starts, the slow dissolution of whatever social contract they’d been operating under. David built a hierarchy without asking. Jamie’s tearing it down just to watch it fall. Chen’s stuck between them, trying to stay neutral in a space too small for neutrality.

The conversation peters out. They’re all tired, though none of them can say why. The exhaustion comes in waves, unpredictable and irresistible.

David’s mid-sentence when his eyes get heavy. He tries to finish the thought but can’t remember what he was saying. Jamie’s pacing slows. Chen’s already slumped against his wall.

And then they’re all asleep.

When they wake, the wrappers will be gone. New food will be waiting. Chen will divide it or David will fight to reclaim that role. The hierarchy will shift again.

And the pit will remain exactly what it is.

A space too small for three people to coexist without conflict. Too empty for that conflict to ever resolve.

They’ll fight and reconcile and fight again. They’ll establish new rules and break them. They’ll create power structures and watch them crumble. Because that’s what humans do when you trap them together with nothing but time and each other.

They make their own hell.

The gray circle of sky doesn’t judge. Doesn’t care. Doesn’t change.

And neither does the pit.

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